The Great Gatsby (Chapter 3)
Ashlynn McNamara
Quotation Analysis / Article
"The only completely stationary object in the room was an enormous couch on which two young women were buoyed up as though upon an anchored balloon. They were both in white, and their dresses were rippling and fluttering as if they had just been blown back in after a short flight around the house. I must have stood for a few moments listening to the whip and snap of the curtains and the groan of a picture on the wall. Then there was a boom as Tom Buchanan shut the rear windows and the caught wind died out about the room, and the curtains and the rugs and the two young women ballooned slowly to the floor" (Fitzgerald.8).
The quote above uses metaphor and personification. When he says "two young women were buoyed up as though upon an anchored balloon", he is using a metaphor by using the heaviness of an anchor as if they were heavily seated on the couch but using the lightness of the balloon to describe the way they looked while sitting upon the couch. Which relates to when he says; "they were both in white, and their dresses were rippling and fluttering as if they had just been blown back in after a short flight around the house". This describes the way the two women look, the color white represents elegance which gives the women a sense of class. The rippling and fluttering gives them the sense of lightness as mentioned as the balloon. He uses personification when he says, " listening to the whip and snap of the curtains and the groan of a picture on the wall". By saying that the picture on the wall was groaning illustrates to us the noise it was making while swaying back and forth on the wall from the wind blowing it.
"There was music from my neighbors house through the summer nights. In his blue gardens men and girls came and went like moths among the whisperings and the champagne and the stars. At high tide in the afternoon I watched his guests diving from the tower of his raft, or taking the sun on the hot sand of his beach while his two motor-boats slit the waters of the Sound, drawing aquaplanes over cataracts of foam" (Fitzgerald.39).
The quote above uses metaphor and formal diction. When he says, "men and girls came and went like moths among the whisperings and the champagne and the stars", instead of saying that they came and went without any hesitation or went through really fast, he compared them to moths who fly really fast and do not stop. He uses formal diction when he uses the words such as "cataracts" and "slit". Instead of saying that the motor-boats went through the Sound, he said they split. He uses other diction by using the word "blue", describing the color of the garden, which probably means there are blue flowers.
Article: http://www.psychologytoday.com/articles/200212/the-power-love